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You asked me if I loved you-
I ask you that today.
I answered then "why yes my love!"
Your answer's gone away.
I will not accept a substitute
Like "if" or "when" or "no"
I will accept no compromise,
If you love me not, then go.

I ask you "do you love me?"
And i really wouldn't mind
If your heart screamed "yes my love!"
But words you couldn't find.
But bitter words betide me
As you answer what I dread,
Not honey coated happiness
But hollowed ash instead.
©2007-2009 ~diamond-cut
:icondiamond-cut:

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I like the second stanza very much, especially the last line.
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Does God believe in me?

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